Deep SHT · Ending Analysis · Hal Ashby · December 1979

Being There Ending: Two Endings, One Umbrella

A seedling on the page · A miracle on screen · An argument with no verdict

The ending of Being There is the shot everyone remembers. Chance the gardener crosses a wintry estate, taps the surface of a pond with his umbrella, and steps onto the water. Hal Ashby holds the shot while a eulogy carries over it, and the film ends there. The image is the reason the film is still argued about. It is also, on the evidence, an afterthought.

The walk is not in Jerzy Kosinski’s 1970 novel. It is not in the January 10, 1979 draft of the screenplay. Both earlier endings resolve on something quieter — a man alone with growing things — and reading them against the finished film is the clearest way to understand what the walking-on-water shot is doing, and what it refuses to say. The film sustains at least three readings of the moment and confirms none of them. This analysis lays out the evidence for each and lets the shot stay as slippery as Ashby built it to be.

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Endings written for Chance

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Readings the shot sustains

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Readings the film confirms

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Umbrella in both endings

DIRECTED
Hal Ashby
NOVEL & SCREENPLAY
Jerzy Kosinski

STARRING
Peter Sellers, Shirley MacLaine
RELEASED
December 1979

PRIMARY TEXTS
1970 novel · 1/10/79 draft · Finished film
SERIES
Deep SHT · Ending Analysis

The evidence

Two Endings on the Page

The final shot. Chance tests the surface with his umbrella before stepping out — the behavior of a man expecting footing, inside the frame the film invites you to read as a miracle. The same umbrella had a different job in the script.

The walking-on-water scene is not in Jerzy Kosinski’s 1970 novel. The book ends with Chance slipping away to be alone in a garden. It is not in the January 10, 1979 draft of the screenplay either. The miracle came later, grafted onto a story that first resolved on a quieter gesture — and the two written endings it replaced are worth setting side by side with the one that reached the screen.

The page · January 10, 1979

An Act of Tending

In the script, Chance’s final act is in the woods. He finds a seedling pinned under a fallen branch, kneels, and clears the snow with his bare hands. He opens his umbrella over the young tree, sheltering it while still letting in the winter sun. Eve finds him there. The script ends on that — an act of tending — with the President’s eulogy carrying from the distance.

The screen · December 1979

An Act of Walking

In the film, Chance crosses the wintry estate, taps the surface of a pond with the same umbrella, and steps onto the water. The eulogy carries over the shot and closes on the line “Life is a state of mind.” The film offers no explanation, and no one on screen sees him do it.

One prop bridges the two endings. On the page the umbrella shelters the seedling; on screen Chance uses it to test the pond. Whatever the walking-on-water shot means, reading the two endings against each other is the clearest way to understand the Being There ending — one version shows a man protecting something small and real, and the other shows him doing the impossible without noticing.

The soundtrack of the miracle

What the Eulogy Is Actually Saying

The scene is scored to Benjamin Rand’s own words. At the funeral, the President reads the dying industrialist’s aphorisms aloud while the pallbearers — financiers and oilmen — carry the coffin. Between breaths, they plot to put Chance in the White House. One of them lands the film’s central pun: their “one and only chance is Chauncey Gardiner.” The man’s name is the joke. Chance is exactly what these people are gambling on.

The sharpest line in the eulogy is easy to miss. Rand recalls being told as a boy that God made man in his own image. That, he says, is when he “decided to manufacture mirrors.” It plays as a capitalist’s throwaway quip, but it describes Chance precisely. He is a mirror. Everyone who meets him sees their own ambitions and beliefs reflected back, and he supplies nothing of his own to interrupt the reflection.

“Decided to manufacture mirrors.”

Benjamin Rand’s eulogy · The line that describes Chance exactly

The eulogy ends on the line that carries over the water, and everything about the final shot answers to it. With that established, the Being There final scene opens onto at least three readings. The film confirms none of them.

LIFE IS A STATE OF MIND.

The eulogy’s last line · The words over the water

Reading one · The miracle

The Mystical Reading: Chance as Holy Fool

The most immediate interpretation takes the moment literally as a miracle. Chance walks the way Christ walks on the Sea of Galilee. A man who has done nothing but garden and repeat plain observations is raised to spiritual and political authority in the same instant. The “holy fool” — the simpleton whose blankness reads as wisdom — fits him cleanly. The irony is that the elevation is hollow: an empty man becomes a vessel for whatever meaning a hungry culture needs to pour into him.

Reading two · The state of mind

The Metaphorical Reading: A Man With No Concept of “Can’t”

Read against “Life is a state of mind,” the water becomes a picture of pure, unburdened being. The title points the same way — Being There renders Heidegger’s Dasein, “being there,” which Kosinski named as a touchstone while writing the novel. Chance carries no self-doubt and no sense of limit. He has no idea that walking on water is impossible, so he does it. The seedling scene in the script is the same thought in a humbler key: Chance wholly absorbed in the act in front of him, untouched by everything the funeral guests are scheming a few yards away.

Reading three · The pier

The Literal Reading: The Audience as the Final Target

The third reading turns the satire on the viewer. Strip the awe away and the grounded explanation is simple: Chance is walking on a submerged pier the camera never shows us. Within the story’s own reality it is the only explanation that holds — he is a gardener, not a messiah. Ashby films the moment so the water breaks under his feet just enough to unsettle you, never enough to prove anything. The pier stays hidden, and the doubt does the work.

THERE IS NO PIER.

Roger Ebert’s rule · And what following it costs

The objection

Ebert’s “No Pier” Objection

Roger Ebert rejected the literal reading by name. In his essay on the film, he recalled shutting down students who reached for a sandbar or a submerged pier. His rule was firm: you may argue about what an image means, but you cannot invent what the movie declines to show. “There is no pier — a movie is exactly what it shows us,” he wrote.

That rule is a good one for a symbol that floats free of any story, and Being There is not that. The whole movie has built an airtight realist premise. Chance is a simpleton, not a savant, and every wonder credited to him has a plain cause the powerful refuse to see. The walk is the last entry in that pattern, not a break from it. A man checking the surface with his umbrella expects footing — that is not how a prophet behaves when he is performing a miracle. The pier is not an explanation imposed on the film; it is the only one that keeps faith with the film’s logic.

And to follow Ebert here is to do something telling. Look at a simpleton on the water, decline to ask how, and you have joined the very credulity the film mocks. Ebert himself wondered whether the movie is about people reading their own wishes into religion and politics. The literal reading is simply the one that declines the miracle.

The Joke Turns on Us

The shift is the point. For two hours the audience has been in on the joke. We always knew Chance was empty while every character mistook him for a sage, and that knowledge made us feel safe. The final shot takes it back. We are the ones who hesitate now, half-ready to call a man on a plank a miracle. We do exactly what the power brokers do with Chance — pour meaning into a blank — at the moment we were surest we never would. The mirror line set it up an hour earlier.

The verdict

The Point Is the Ambiguity

Chance is a blank slate, and everyone around him paints on it. The ending does the same to the audience. Mystical, metaphorical, literal — the film accommodates all three and settles none, which is the design rather than a defect. Plenty of viewers leave certain Chance is a holy innocent, and the film never tells them they are wrong.

The richest way to read the ending of Being There is to hold it beside the seedling it replaced. One ending shows a man protecting something small and real; the other shows a world deciding he can do the impossible. The film chose the second, and trusted us to argue about why.

William Robert Rich
William Robert Rich

William Robert Rich is the editor of ScreenplayHowTo.com (SHT) and co-author of Story Maps: The Films of Christopher Nolan.

Based in Brooklyn, New York, William's unique approach to narrative analysis fuses his background as a former teacher and a software engineer. He realized that the efficient logic of code and the clear pedagogy of the classroom could be applied directly to screenwriting.

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