Top Gun: Maverick — The Script vs. What Got Filmed

The Opening That Was Written and Never Used

Page one of the shooting script is the carrier deck at dawn, jets launching under the titles. Scene A3 is a helmet with red, white and blue stripes, a man with his back turned, and a single line of dialogue: “Talk to me, Goose…” A voice calls him Captain Mitchell. The script then match cuts to Maverick opening his eyes in an Airstream trailer.

None of that is in the film. Maverick first says the line in the Darkstar cockpit at 11m, and says it again before the mission at 86m. The scripted flash-forward put the third-act close-up first. Everything after it would answer a question the audience had already watched him ask. The filmmakers built that frame, and cut it.

Not Quite the Real World

Kosinski is also on record about what the opening is for, and it is not realism.

“Top Gun to me is kind of a — it was a universe, it’s a world that you have to go into. This is not quite the real world. This is a world where the sun is always setting, you can ride a Ninja without a helmet with no fear of being pulled over.”

Joseph Kosinski, same watch-along (00:03:02). He adds that roughly half the film’s audience had not seen the 1986 original, which made the opening a re-introduction rather than a reunion (00:06:09).

The Promise: Why Maverick Pulled Rooster’s Papers

Rooster states his grievance at 43m. The reason arrives twenty-three minutes later, in a bedroom, to a woman outside the military. Penny has to ask him twice.

Carole never wanted her son to fly after what happened to Goose in the original film. She made Maverick promise before she died (66m). Penny asks the obvious question: does Rooster know that? Maverick’s answer is the whole character in two sentences. Rooster will always resent him for what he did, so why should he resent her too? He adds the part he has never said to Rooster. He was trying to be the father the kid lost, and he wishes he had done it better (66m).

Name the structure precisely, because most readings call this a story about guilt over Goose’s death. The operative debt is narrower. Maverick’s obligation is a promise to a widow, and the promise is that Bradley will not fly. Every choice Maverick makes about Rooster runs through that clause. Pulling the papers honors it. Training him for the mission breaks it. Taking the missile at 101m does the thing the promise was for.

The film also stages Penny’s parenting as the direct instruction. She gave Amelia more freedom than she thought her daughter was ready for. She learned to let her make her own mistakes (65m). Maverick asks how she manages it. The answer is the mission brief for the rest of his arc.

Why Carole Is Not in the Film

Meg Ryan does not appear, and Kosinski gives a structural reason rather than a scheduling one. Carole’s wish is what locks the plot. A living Carole would complicate it for both Maverick and Rooster. He calls it one of the hard choices in telling a continuation, and adds that he would have liked to work with her.

Read against the promise itself, the omission is load-bearing rather than sentimental. A living Carole could release Maverick from the promise, confirm it to Rooster, or answer the question herself. Any of those collapses the misunderstanding that the film runs on for ninety minutes. Killing her off-screen is what makes the secret a secret.

Rooster and Hangman: Two Ways to Lead

The ensemble is built as a single argument with two positions, and the film introduces both in the bar before either has flown. Hangman announces himself as the only active-duty naval aviator with a confirmed air-to-air kill. Then he asks which of them has what it takes to follow him. Rooster’s counter is that anyone following Hangman ends up in an early grave. Hangman’s return is the sharper line, and the one the film pays off twice: “You’re snug on that perch, waiting for just the right moment… that never comes” (29m).

The canyon debriefs then dramatize each man’s failure mode with the same question. Hangman outruns Payback and Fanboy into a wall, and defends it in four words: “They couldn’t keep up” (52m). Rooster misses the window and defends that in three: “We’re alive” (52m). Maverick’s verdict on Rooster lands harder, because it carries an argument. A minute late means a dogfight against fifth-generation aircraft in an F-18. That is a death sentence (53m).

CharacterWhat the film has them doStated failure modeWhere it turns
MaverickTrains the pilots he does not want to send, then flies with them.Keeps a promise by making a decision for someone else and never explaining it (43m, 66m).Takes the missile aimed at Rooster (101m).
RoosterFlies the second bomb blind when the laser fails (99m).Holds back; flies slow; carries a grievance that is factually correct (52m).Disobeys the recall order and comes back for Maverick (104m).
HangmanSits on the deck in the spare, asking to launch (101m).Leaves his wingman; measures a run by his own survival (52m).Arrives uninvited and kills the last fighter (116m).

The Ending on the Page and the Ending on Screen

The last spoken words in Top Gun: Maverick come on the carrier deck at 120m. Everything after that plays without dialogue. A stop at the bar where Penny is out sailing, then the hangar, then “Hold My Hand” from 121m to the end of the sequence at about 124m.

The shooting script details that hangar. Phoenix demonstrates air-to-air combat to Amelia with two model planes. Maverick walks Penny around the P-51. Rooster looks over Maverick’s workspace: photographs of Maverick and Ice, Maverick and Goose, Rooster as a boy. On top of the pile sits Maverick and Rooster on the carrier. He turns, sees the makeshift family taking shape in the makeshift home, and smiles. Kosinski confirms the design intent directly.

“He’s given his whole life to aviation, but he is alone at the opening of this film. This always was a journey of Maverick essentially kind of finding a family — which is a reason why we return to the hangar at the end of the film and see that it is a very different feel when we go back.”

Joseph Kosinski, watch-along with Josh Horowitz, January 25, 2024 (00:05:01).

William Robert Rich
William Robert Rich

William Robert Rich is the editor of ScreenplayHowTo.com (SHT) and co-author of Story Maps: The Films of Christopher Nolan.

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